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| Steps to heaven |
The deeper part of the dark,
Is when you cannot hear your heart.
Step by step you make amends,
choosing wisely, picking up friends.
Store bought tokens take you plans,
putting them in machines that make you dance.
What a country town that drags you down,
surrounded by people that makes you frown.
Speaking words that seem profound,
digging up dirt that should remain underground.
I am just a simple person that loves to lounge,
play the guitar and sing out loud.
But men try to crush me, tear me apart,
By snatching my tools and thrashing my heart,
Ditching my ways and putting up thorn,
Stepping on me and making me mourn.
I want to roam, I want to sing,
I want to fly spreading my wing.
Somewhere beyond life I want to reach,
A place where all rules I can breach.
Where I can be me and noone else,
where I can dance and sing as my heart tells.
A place where there is only light and no dark,
somewhere in this world I can hear to my heart.
Step by step you make amends,
choosing wisely, picking up friends.
Store bought tokens take you plans,
putting them in machines that make you dance.
What a country town that drags you down,
surrounded by people that makes you frown.
Speaking words that seem profound,
digging up dirt that should remain underground.
I am just a simple person that loves to lounge,
play the guitar and sing out loud.
But men try to crush me, tear me apart,
By snatching my tools and thrashing my heart,
Ditching my ways and putting up thorn,
Stepping on me and making me mourn.
I want to roam, I want to sing,
I want to fly spreading my wing.
Somewhere beyond life I want to reach,
A place where all rules I can breach.
Where I can be me and noone else,
where I can dance and sing as my heart tells.
A place where there is only light and no dark,
somewhere in this world I can hear to my heart.
+ comments + 17 comments
lovely verses to break free from the shackles of life!
Love the rhythm in this poem.
Brilliant work Ashwini. The way you ended it is super.
Indeed if such a place exists, I would definitely wanna go :)
love the poem !
Beautiful, could very well make a rap! ;)
nice and beautiful...
Thanks @Sunita maa'm for your lovely comment :-) . . .
Thanks @Marita for commenting :-) . . .
Thanks @Saru for your comment. I am glad that you liked the end, I was quite confused how to bring a happy ending to the poem, but ultimately I did it . . .
Thanks @Neha for commenting. If I get the place, I will surely inform you :-P . . .
Thanks @TTT for commenting. I am happy to know that you loved the poem . . .
Thanks @Rajesh Dharmarajan for commenting. I am not at all good with raps, you will have to help me out ;-)
Thanks for commenting @happy quotes . . .
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