We were sitting on either side of a bench in a lonely park, looking down at the fallen leaves of that tree where our names were engraved. That two minutes of silence broke when I looked at her and saw a round tear roll down her cheek. I went to her side and held her tight in my arms. My heart became light feeling her warm breath on my shoulder, so I hugged her more tight and more closer to me . . . .
-> My first 55 fiction.
So, please do comment . . . .
-> My first 55 fiction.
So, please do comment . . . .
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55r should have a beginning and end in a crisp short way. This could be a flash fiction if you add some more to it. Though I liked the idea. Keep writing. Do read some of mine, I am also experimenting with them. Best to you
Thanks @tikulicious, for your comment. Will surely visit your blog to check out 55r.
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