Minutes To Midnight - The Runaway
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| Minutes To Midnight - Cover page |
Prologue :-
“Sir, where should I take you?”
“Err… Take me to the airport, and take the long route please. I
will pay you extra”
“OK! Sir”
I opened my bag and took out a book. The cover page showed ‘The
child under the tree by Anurag Kumar’. This book was the bestseller in India,
not only in India but in other countries too. And the writer was on seventh
sky. Very rich, famous and loved by everyone and that was no-one other than me.
Yes, I am Anurag Kumar, you humble servant. Some years ago I dreamt of all that
I have today name, fame, riches and all such filth and that time I had
something I dream of today family, friends, relatives and many such necessities
that I don’t have now.
Six years ago I did something I am paying for till today. I wish I
should never had done that. I wish I could fly back in time and undo what I did
years back. All this started about ten years ago...
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Waiting for more! Nice start. From a feedback end, I would say help me as a reader visualize it a little more. Where are you? Is it your car? A cab? An auto? How does the driver look like? Does he look scary? Intimidating? You could probably pack some more thrill because 9 times out of 10 am guessing the prologue is like the first impression of a book and the initial pages are the ones that have to keep the reader captivated and have him going! Waiting to read the rest! Keep it up!
Intriguing wud love to read more of it..
If you dont mind some proff reading is required though, but again m no expert ;)
Thanks @Deepa for the feedback. You are right prologue is the first impression to the readers. I certainly didn't keep this in mind, will improve this soon.
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Thanks @Kapil for your comment. Actually I have done mistakes while copying from my diary . . .
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